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Flying Frisbees In the 4th dimension
Contributed by
Banjosandwitch
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Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 04:17:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Flying Frisbees In the 4th dimension
Welcome to the 4th dimension
In HD 1080P full HD 3D
Digital depth charges detonate
Like sonic waves off Alderan’s moon
Full laser beam protection on all doors
Robots patrol all floors
Welcome to Omega City
We are one people, one law, one voice
Automaton society, chrome finish on all surfaces
They are trying to track my every move
They want to stop my poetry uploads
I have to stay in the silver shadows
In-between your Plasma screens
The time for revolution is here
Raise your digital remotes and cheer
The Frisbee flyer from the 4th dimension is here!
By Banjosandwitch03/07/10
Copyright ©
Banjosandwitch
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2010-07-16 04:17:13]
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Re: Flying Frisbees In the 4th dimension
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:28:57 AM AEST
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| nice one, i enjoyed reading this, brought a smile to my face, well done. |
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Re: Flying Frisbees In the 4th dimension
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by spud on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:48:45 AM AEST
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Hi,
A worrying insight into a brain-sequestered future.
Many a true word spoken in jest.
Well scribed!
Tommy
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Re: Flying Frisbees In the 4th dimension
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by Brasco on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 03:30:34 AM AEST
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| reminded me of Mass Effect 2 lol, good write! |
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