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Sunset upon the Sea
Contributed by
brasco
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Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 02:11:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Orange orb softly stave-
Thy kiss upon the open sea
Nor melt behind horizon free,
Or nimbly flee… from sight;
Not ere shedding citrus light
To skim across glassy wave-
Hover there, but yet a spell
And in this frame pray thee dwell.
To look upon thy calming grace
Thy soft glow upon weary face~
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Re: Sunset upon the Sea
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:30:50 AM AEST
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| this is wonderful. well constructed and very well writen. |
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Re: Sunset upon the Sea
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by Philw on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:34:36 AM AEST
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| awesome. gave me shivers |
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Re: Sunset upon the Sea
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 11:49:17 PM AEST
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just lovely....u beautifully present different elements of nature as one. great job
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Sunset upon the Sea
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by omarzz on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 03:11:13 AM AEST
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| A very calming read |
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