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The Gift
Contributed by
Sushila
on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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What would she like I wondered
Could I get her some jewellery?
What sort would she like I pondered
As I walked towards the display gallery.
It stood elegant on the display counter
Waiting eager to capture my attention.
Least did I expect this encounter
My mind whirled without retention.
It’s just another birthday I thought
My mind was filled with reluctance.
Though the urge to purchase I fought
The occasion warranted its importance.
What the heck I seemed to like it
So ahead with the purchase I did.
With radiant beam my face was lit
To the friendly cashier a farewll I bid.
Copyright ©
Sushila
... [
2010-07-15 23:25:00]
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Re: The Gift
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 12:01:57 AM AEST
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| this is cute:) |
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Re: The Gift
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by antikythera on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:05:32 AM AEST
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| Not bad, nice to write poems about experiences. |
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Re: The Gift
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by DIOGENES on
Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 02:05:34 PM AEST
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An impulse buyer! Walmart loves you!
Very nice piece, well written. Thank you. |
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