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The Forest's Grace
Contributed by
The_Writing_Master
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Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 01:11:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The noble panther
hides in the forest bushes.
Awaiting his prey.
The humble monkey
swings on the forest’s branches.
Watching, and waiting.
The forest itself.
It is the home of many
tranquil, and peaceful
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2010-07-15 13:11:38]
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Re: The Forest's Grace
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 12:06:52 AM AEST
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| I like the shortness of this. :) |
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Re: The Forest's Grace
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:35:20 AM AEST
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| fantastic, short and to the point, well done. keep writing. |
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Re: The Forest's Grace
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by andrewjones12 on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:53:49 AM AEST
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well done friend, i injoyed this.
-andrew |
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Re: The Forest's Grace
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by quadira on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 10:15:31 AM AEST
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| I have to agree. Personally i love shorter poems that give you enough to ponder on and doesnt overload your mind with words and information. An indepth picture with so few words. thanks |
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