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A Medical Ordeal
Contributed by
Sushila
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 11:18:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Strange thoughts run through my mind
No matter how brave I try to be.
Words to curb my fear I try to find
But there are none to convince me.
Shall I go ahead with my decision
And leave everything in His hands?
Faith I must have in the physician
Whose repute is known to all he tends.
How scared I feel on seeing the knife
My family I have not told them yet.
This operation is a must to save my life
They comfort me with their eyes wet.
Deep inside within me I could hear
A soothing voice saying He is near.
Do not worry child and face the test
As I am the Doer and know what is best.
Copyright ©
Sushila
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2010-07-14 23:18:02]
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Re: A Medical Ordeal
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by The_Writing_Master on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 12:20:05 AM AEST
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| This poem is very meaningful, and inspiring for anyone having to get an operation, great work! 5 stars! |
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Re: A Medical Ordeal
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 07:53:25 AM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO Roses at your bedside dear. I've had surgery 8 time in my lifetime. Oh how scared I was each time, but I learned, there's no need to fret. Your Loving Heavenly Father will not forget...........you and will guide your surgeons hands, for sure.
Well put together, dear Sushila, and made with much meaning. This was a splendid poem, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
WELCOME to YPDC..........we're so glad you joined us you see...............you'll love it hear, and always remember like a family, we're always near.
Warm love
consue
P.S. I have you in "My Favorites" now.......keep writing those lovely poems, 'cause I'll be reading them! |
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Re: A Medical Ordeal
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 08:52:21 AM AEST
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this is well writen, deep and meaninful.
nice write. |
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