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Earth
Contributed by
The_Writing_Master
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Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 10:36:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Earth
The world lies in endless mysteries.
The Earth, the giver and taker of life.
The sun sets slowly over the water’s horizon.
The wind sweeps over the water’s surface.
Colors of red and blue spread afar over the horizon, all to fade with time.
The stars shine brightly overhead, just out of reach.
Skies of bright blue lay out overhead.
Waves reach the beach’s surface.
The world is a fearful place.
Giant red sparks fly, as another volcano bursts.
More sparks fly, as another gun ignites, as another bomb
explodes. As another war comes and goes, history repeats, yet again.
From the dew that quenches the land, to the sand that parches the desert,
the Earth remains the same.
From the snow covered mountains, to the rocky plateaus, the
Earth remains our home. As another sun sets and another sun rises,
another day begins. The sea, the land, the mountains,
all parts of our home.
The colors of this world fade with time.
But for know, the world, and all its adventures wait.
So use the time you have and make it an experience to remember.
For the will to live and the desire to explore knows no bounds, nor rest.
It is one world we live in, may it never change, and may it never change us.
Our world, the giver and taker of life.
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Re: Earth
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by Sushila on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 11:23:40 PM AEST
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Good work and welcome abroad!
Well written meaningful words.
Look forward to reading more of your poems
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Re: Earth
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 12:26:41 AM AEST
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nice job with this one.
welcome to the site! |
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Re: Earth
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by andrewjones12 on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 06:59:38 AM AEST
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i dig it! welcome, im a newer member also, and i do look foward to reading some more of your work. i have writtin similar, check them out and tell me what you think.
-andrew |
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Re: Earth
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by kye on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 10:05:33 AM AEST
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I think your poem was very meaningful and had a majestic sense of imagery. I could see your descriptions and greatly admire your writing technique.
Well done.
Kye- |
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Re: Earth
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by joe-joe on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 12:45:48 PM AEST
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| nice write...enjoyed the picture that your words painted... |
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Re: Earth
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by antikythera on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:12:43 AM AEST
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| Great poem. I wrote one similar called "Awe of Earth." You should check out mine and compare styles. I like yours a lot, very political. |
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Re: Earth
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 03:06:36 AM AEST
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| The earth neither gives life nor takes it but that is Gods doing. |
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