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Desire
Contributed by
ammar
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Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 12:55:40 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I wanted a life
Devoid of stress
And I strove to learn
How to find success,
To be a master of what
I desired each day
Money, it seemed,
Finds you a way
But now I pause
And carefully see
Everything and everyone
Surrounding me:
Money, I have learnt,
Plays a negligible part
For happiness is the ultimate
Desire of each heart
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2010-07-14 12:55:40]
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Re: Desire
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by Sushila on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 11:37:53 PM AEST
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| How right you are. Simple and nicely written poem. Well done. Look forward to reading more of your poems. |
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Re: Desire
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by The_Writing_Master on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 01:33:35 AM AEST
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| very well said, the poem had a nice flow! |
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Re: Desire
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by andrewjones12 on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 07:20:49 AM AEST
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they say you cant but happiness but in many cases hookers arent free..
hahah j/k. very nice. |
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Re: Desire
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by pooja on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:19:44 AM AEST
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Simple and nice.
An ode to the beautiful pursuit of happiness ! |
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Re: Desire
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by antikythera on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:13:31 AM AEST
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| Good rhymes. Nice style. |
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Re: Desire
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 07:08:59 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. Short and sweet. Foresight my brother is always better than hindsight. But we utilise the latter disproportionate to the former |
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