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Sleep's Voice
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 03:58:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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The sound of inner peace
hypnotizes
the soul.
Cottonly clouds quietly colliding
carrying
dreams.
Subtle raindrops drip drop
releasing
subconscious sorrow.
The voice of sleep
whispers.
Quiet murmurs of calm
reverberate
in the dreamer's psyche.
I long for the time again
when I can hear
sleep's voice!
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-07-14 03:58:27]
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Re: Sleep's Voice
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by andrewjones12 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 08:52:28 AM AEST
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the sound of inner peace hypnotizes the soul(to me means that stage right before rm sleep) cottonly clouds quietly colliding(to me, sounds like your bed turning into a haven for dreaming to take place) now your dreaming, but subconsciously in sorrow because you know you'll have to wake up eventually. then sleep whispering to you that its okay to wake, for it will return again someday and reverberate with its fimilar expereinces. and the end is blataint. im tired to=). but this is what i felt about this wonderful, even calming to me, peice.
very beautiful.
-andrew
oh and p.s. awsome repititon |
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Re: Sleep's Voice
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by kye on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 09:49:27 AM AEST
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When I read your poem, I saw great depth and a chemistry with words.
You also have an artistic flair in your imagery. And, suddenly a dot of paint - isn't a dot of paint at all but a Monet. I say this for very few could write of insomnia and make it artistic and poetic.
Kye-
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Re: Sleep's Voice
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 11:36:07 AM AEST
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| this is so well writen, every word of every stanza flows off the page giving the reader a rare insight to this terrible problem. well done. |
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Re: Sleep's Voice
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by pooja on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 03:14:45 AM AEST
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This is as cool as they come !
Your poem itself has a hypnotic quality ! Ironically, like a beautiful lullaby :)
A very reverberating poem. Great job ! |
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Re: Sleep's Voice
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by myworld on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 03:54:10 AM AEST
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Nice piece,
Very gentle and easy to read, but has this calming effect.
Thank you :) |
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Re: Sleep's Voice
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by Spike on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:23:41 AM AEST
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a take on days'dark release guaranteed to make the reader swoon. Nicely done.
Spike |
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Re: Sleep's Voice
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by slay797 on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 11:42:14 PM AEST
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| so soothing, read it just after i changed my theme to light blue so it meshed perfectly haha dunno if its a coincidence but that was perfect |
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Re: Sleep's Voice
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 07:43:11 AM AEST
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In Trine,
with the skies the earth and your soul |
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Re: Sleep's Voice
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by asmith71291 on
Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 12:57:41 PM AEST
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You almost taunt with the hypnotic quality of sleep's voice. This is fantastic.
Alexis |
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