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Company
Contributed by
slay797
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Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 01:56:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Amber bubbles grace
Comfort me and keep me warm
My Euphoria
Copyright ©
slay797
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2010-07-14 01:56:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Company
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 06:34:30 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful haiku. You expressed a great deal in few words. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Re: Company
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 07:07:52 PM AEST (User
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^_^ |
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Re: Company
(User Rating: 1 ) by antikythera on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:15:04 AM AEST (User
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This is not a poem.
Use puncuation, use words...to me this is like drawing a single line on a canvas...too minimalist |
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