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Full Moon
Contributed by
Sushila
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Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 11:46:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Far across the dark skies
Beaming so high with pride
We watched with envious sighs
The beauty of the golden bride.
From a little crescent she grew
To shine so high with grace
We watched together as a crew
Her beauty we wanted to brace.
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Re: Full Moon
(User Rating: 1 )
by mvvenkataraman on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 07:50:01 AM AEST
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Dear respected Sushila,
Moon is ever beautiful
Your poetry is meaningful
Your observation is useful
My heart is now with joy full.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
M V VENKATARAMAN |
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Re: Full Moon
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 06:25:07 PM AEST
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| simple beautiful |
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Re: Full Moon
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by The_Writing_Master on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 01:13:41 PM AEST
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| Now that's what I like to see! A true poet take whatever the day throws at him/her, and can make magical words out of it! |
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Re: Full Moon
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by misstee on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 10:00:01 AM AEST
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| beautifully written |
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Re: Full Moon
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by antikythera on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:16:17 AM AEST
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| Excellent structure, and style. Good job! |
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Re: Full Moon
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by RAJNANDY on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 05:49:28 AM AEST
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THANKS DEAR ENJOYED READING THIS POEM !
=Raj |
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