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Blue Moon
Contributed by
IrshLass
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 09:04:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Listen blue moon, to my plea
hear me cry out.
Let your wisdom guide me
Im wallowing in doubt.
Endless days have stole my light
put a dagger through my soul.
Knock me out this sleepless night
and pray I wake up whole
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Re: Blue Moon
(User Rating: 1 )
by AngelFox on
Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 10:15:07 PM AEST
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The last two sentences grabbed me. Great writing. What more can I say than I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Re: Blue Moon
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by antikythera on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:16:47 AM AEST
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| Nice structure, keep it up. |
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Re: Blue Moon
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by Skezza on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 07:26:08 PM AEST
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| This is a really strong poem. Good writing |
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