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Thank You
Contributed by
evah2121
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Monday, 12th July 2010 @ 03:09:21 PM in AEST
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I want to thank you for sticking by my side,
and when I said I wanted you gone, I kinda lied.
I have known you for too long, to see you disappear.
That's why I cry at night, when I know your nowhere near.
Thank you for all the smiles,and for respecting my heart.
For It Is very fragile It can Easily fall apart.
You held my hand while I was going through a lot.
Now I know where I stand.
Thank you for helping me get back on track,
you have helped me forget about the past.
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evah2121
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2010-07-12 15:09:21]
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Re: Thank You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th July 2010 @ 04:41:20 PM AEST
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Evelin, you are wise beyond your years. You have graciousness and maturity.
Nicely scribed. May I make one small tiny itsy bitsy suggestion? The apostrophe is our friend. (your/you're). 
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Thank You
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 12th July 2010 @ 07:23:03 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem showing how much appreciation you have for this person in your life. Genuine and pure goodness. Nicely written!
Heidi
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Re: Thank You
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 03:36:32 PM AEST
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what a genuine and heartfelt poem...
we really cant thank enough when we have so much appreciation for another.
i enjoyed your beautifully written piece :)
take care
-K.Z. |
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