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80
Contributed by
Angel-1
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Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 10:49:20 PM in AEST
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Waves crash
And thunder roar
Lovers dashed
And my spirit will soar
High vs. low
Not even worth believing
No one knows
All of my pain and grieving
Light disappears
Like tears in the sea
Confronting fears
Ending whatever could be
Endlessly together
Eternally apart
Hoping forever
Deep within my heart
Thinking about
Not thinking at all
Carrying out
My final epic fall
Cruising around
Picking up speed
Too much found
To fill my empty need
Once, twice
Over and over I’ve failed
Final advice
But these thoughts cannot be derailed
Endlessly together
Forever apart
Hoping forever
Deep within my heart
Finally free
Leaving nothing behind
Nothing but me
Planning in my mind
Crunching metals
Suddenly coming to a halt
Red dripping petals
Self-destruction is my fault
Endlessly together
Forever apart
Hoping, but never
As glass pierces my heart
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Re: 80
(User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 11:33:21 AM AEST
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A smashing start !
Your poem has beautiful ironies, paradoxes, that are refreshing.
My favourite 'Thinking about not thinking at all'
Great job ! Keep writing. |
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Re: 80
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 04:36:05 AM AEST
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| banjo is always looking for song writers |
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