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First love
Contributed by
Matthewreid
on
Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 10:08:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She was my best friend
It seems all that has come to an end
The pain of the first love runs deep,
Paralyzed all I can do is weep
I loved her so very much
No more do I feel her loving touch
Im reminded of her where ever i go
These memories i bury below
While my dreams die in the cold
My heat screams from the pain untold
No one sees the pain I'm in
How could they its buried beneath my skin
I begged her to stay
But still she walked away
Said she always be there
She lied and left like she didnt care
My heart has been shattered,
Hopes and dream, scattered
All my love is gone
And feels like there is no dawn
To her my heart belongs
Ever still after all the wrongs
I'd do anything for her warm embrace
Because she'll always be my amanda grace : )
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Re: First love
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 12:10:58 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
You're a good writer.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: First love
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by Poetry4fun on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 08:32:58 AM AEST
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Wow I liked it alot!
Very genuine!
Great job! |
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Re: First love
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by pooja on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 10:35:50 AM AEST
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While the poem rang with sadness, the ending was really sweet :)
A great way to put across your feelings
Bless you and keep writing ! |
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Re: First love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 12:49:37 PM AEST
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| well expressed, i have been there too. good write :) |
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Re: First love
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by manbeast on
Monday, 12th July 2010 @ 03:38:03 PM AEST
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| thanks for joining and for this post |
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