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In the Land Above the Clouds
Contributed by
HelloBob
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Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 08:49:51 AM in AEST
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oops
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You can be saved.
Never fear. You are here,
in the land above the clouds.
Go soar through the sun, and back.
Not ever poem has to rhyme, not every eqaution can be solved.
Fall asleep and land in your sweet dreams,
it'll all be okay.
You are here,
safe and sound in the land above the clouds.
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Re: In the Land Above the Clouds
(User Rating: 1 ) by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 11:26:03 AM AEST (User
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nice write. Sounds inspired by thoughts of Heaven |
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Re: In the Land Above the Clouds
(User Rating: 1 ) by pooja on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:17:22 AM AEST (User
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Wow....very soft and beautiful. Definitely divine inspiration. So comforting, lulls one into a snug cocoon ! :) Good job ! |
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