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Brainwashed Ape
Contributed by
zeberdee
on
Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 08:38:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Waiting for the summer rain
people are killing each other
following the path of the insane
I'll stab you in the back my brother!
the rain falls and washes my head
let the rivers run red with the blood
or back away instead
everything becomes confusing in the mud
smiles from people are suppose to remind
me of love, but instead I am blind
there is water in my eyes
I get aboard the blue bus
and wait for all the lies
a mask is on the next seat
and I put it on as we drive down the street
"Hi how was your day?"
"Fine, it was long and boring"
"Well at least I get a good pay"
"Oh aint that adoring?"
Copyright ©
zeberdee
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2010-07-10 08:38:20]
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Re: Brainwashed Ape
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 11:29:57 AM AEST
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| very good write |
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Re: Brainwashed Ape
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 08:39:53 PM AEST
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Very well-written. It is full of meaning about people waiting to stab you in the back. Nice use of imagery.
Heidi |
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Re: Brainwashed Ape
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by JJAA_91 on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 09:36:56 AM AEST
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| a very good way of showing people are just out for number one. i think everyone can empathise with this. a very nice piece |
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