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With this pad and this pen
Contributed by
Bunit682
on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 08:40:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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poetry is like an old friend
When I sit with this pad and this pen
I let my emotions go,
sit back rexlax and just flow.
I close my eyes and it starts the show
My sub conscience takes over and I lose control
I become one with the words,
Adjectives and verbs,
nouns by the pounds
untill it drowns
out every thing else in the world
all my sorrows and the loss of a girl
I feel so unstoppable
like it is impossible
for anything to bring me down
until I can vent no more and real life surrounds
me once again
untill the next time I pick up a pen
and the next chapter in my life begins
Copyright ©
Bunit682
... [
2010-07-09 20:40:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: With this pad and this pen
(User Rating: 1 ) by Obnoxious_Bread on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 09:46:00 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed reading this one, it really captures that feeling of overwhelming inspiration and power of emotional communication that we feel through writing
Thanks for sharing :D |
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Re: With this pad and this pen
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eagle on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 11:52:15 PM AEST (User
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This poem really flows from the pen and the tongue, I like it. |
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Re: With this pad and this pen
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 03:06:45 AM AEST (User
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yes, a really lovely free flowing poem, well write, well done. |
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Re: With this pad and this pen
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 08:42:07 AM AEST (User
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Hi,
Great style, great topic, great writing!
Tommy
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