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Forigiveness
Contributed by
evah2121
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Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 12:32:37 PM in AEST
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I don't want to loose you, Because I've realized all the things we have been through. Yes, we have been through a lot, But It doesn't mean our Journey has to stop. I regret all the things I said, It's all I think about at night while I'm laying In bed. It haunts me at night, Realizing there's a chance that we can't make things right. I don't want to Believe, That your actually going to leave. I don't want to accept the fact, That your probably never gonna come back. I'll give you some space, I'm sure going to miss your warm embrace. After all this mess, There's one thing I want to Bless. Appreciate the things you have, Cause In a split second everything can go Bad. I'm hoping one day you will Forgive me for my Foolishness, All I'm asking Is for your Forgiveness.
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Re: Forigiveness
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 01:15:11 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! Roses at your feet.
You are a great poet my dear. At only 15, you have so much talent, never fear.
WELCOME TO YPDC,. We are so glad you can join us..........Welcome aboard!
Keep up the good work, and I just know you'll receive forgiveness. How could anyone refuse you after your lovely poetry!
Warm love
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Re: Forigiveness
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by thebadguy9999 on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 08:30:02 PM AEST
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| very good poem |
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Re: Forigiveness
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by voyage on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 03:28:06 PM AEST
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| very nice. it makes sense and true |
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Re: Forigiveness
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 11:36:24 PM AEST
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| Don't be a slave to your desires. Don't worsip your soul the more you exercise self control the less you'll have to br sorry for |
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Re: Forigiveness
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by bleedinheart on
Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 08:14:39 AM AEST
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| good lot of feeling in it well done |
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Re: Forigiveness
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by Shawni on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 02:20:28 PM AEST
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| We've all been in this position, great self expression! |
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Re: Forigiveness
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by poeticjestix on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 03:25:47 AM AEST
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| been there. done that. We all learn from our mistakes. You capture the regret and forlorn hope well. |
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