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PEACE
Contributed by
evah2121
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Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 01:07:48 AM in AEST
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Wouldn't It be nice If there was no hate,
we would all have fun & have a lot of faith.
Those times where your smile would never fade;
It would just get bigger & bigger.
Those days where you would have no fears,
you would laugh so hard you could see Tears.
If only we made this world collide,with no hate,
and possibly put the negativity aside.
It could be our goal, as the whole world.
To put this nonsense under control.
We can full fill those empty hearts,
and heal those who are torn apart.
If only we could accept everyone for who they are,
but we as humans make It seem so hard.
I understand that nobody Is perfect; It would be so bizarre.
Nobody would be able to show who they really are.
Can't we make an effort to build one strong community,
and give those people who had made mistakes,
one last opportunity.
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evah2121
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Re: PEACE
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by thebadguy9999 on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 08:06:03 AM AEST
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| very good poem.We will have peace when Jesus returns,if you want to be a part of it give your life to him |
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Re: PEACE
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by pooja on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 10:22:20 AM AEST
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| A very nice poem. full of hope. There is never a perfect world, but we must always find it in our heats to hope and make it a little bit better ! :) inspirational. Well-written. |
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