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After That
Contributed by
punkrocknemo
on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 05:59:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A week now weve been apart
And still it breaks my heart.
I know its all my fault
which makes it even worse.
You were my everything
I was whole when i had you
Now i have no clue what to do.
I said that it was over that i didnt want you
but immediately i regreted my words
for i knew it wasnt true.
I never thought this would happen
Its a nightmare come true
but still all i want is you.
That never changed even when i left
You were always in my heart
I said i was over u
but now i know that was never true.
All those tears ive shed over you
must mean i love you its very true.
I say things i dont mean
Just trying to wash away the hurt and be clean
Truth is i love you with all of my heart.
Those 4 months were the best
but now my heart is hurting in my chest.
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Re: After That
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by evah2121 on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 06:29:20 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this In so many ways, It's like you read my mind. Good work, You're very creative :) |
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Re: After That
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by Sushila on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 09:55:56 PM AEST
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| nicely written words of feeling |
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Re: After That
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by Poetry4fun on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 10:43:01 PM AEST
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| I've deffinately been through this! You don't know what you have until it's gone, great poem! Beautiful writing! |
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Re: After That
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by thebadguy9999 on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 09:24:26 AM AEST
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| nice write. sorry for your loss |
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