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Your World Is My World
Contributed by
evah2121
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Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 11:43:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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We are all Individuals In this big world.
Yet, we need support and comfort.
We smile when we can,
And cry even If It's not the plan.
We wish we can hold on to the things we love the most.
We don't want to let go,
as long as you know ,
that your dreams are getting close,
Everything will be alright.
I'll be there to say goodnight.
Take a rest after your long day,
Tomorrow everything will be better.
I'll give you a kiss,& I'll stay,
I'll even write you my feelings In a letter.
No need to feel discouraged,
Don't keep your feelings In a storage.
I'm here to listen,
To see your eyes glisten.
Your world Is tumbling down In a heart beat,
I see you swept down on your two feet.
Your world Is my world,
Don't pretend to be fine,
I see your dying deep inside.
But don't worry, I'll be there to give you comfort.
Copyright ©
evah2121
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2010-07-08 11:43:00]
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Re: Your World Is My World
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 08:07:00 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Very good writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Your World Is My World
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 08:10:02 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Very beautiful senous write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Your World Is My World
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 12:00:53 AM AEST
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positive and comforting words many people need to hear these days :]
take care
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Re: Your World Is My World
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by thebadguy9999 on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 08:08:34 AM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: Your World Is My World
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by cetblue on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:15:10 PM AEST
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This is such a sweet poem! Well done.
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