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True Love?
Contributed by
lovesucks
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Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It wasn't all it's cracked up to be,
Your still you and I'm still me
You've gone and left
No longer to see
But this love for you won't let me be, it drives me crazy
But, without a blink, without a glance you just left with no thoughts of a second chance
I love you so much, but you don't love me
So I'll be strong
And set you fee
(If your love is true you'll come back to me)
TAJ
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lovesucks
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2003-04-16 16:45:00]
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Re: True Love?
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 05:43:09 PM AEST
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Great write, the last line says it all.
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Re: True Love?
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:15:09 PM AEST
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words well spoken
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Re: True Love?
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 09:41:54 PM AEST
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Great rhymes. It flows well. I enjoyed it. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: True Love?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 05:51:37 PM AEST
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Loved this!! Last line is so true... love your work so far!!
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Re: True Love?
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by ThirtyDays on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 08:09:08 PM AEST
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good poem.. u have been left at the scene of a crash too i see.. wondering what happened..
I'd love to have an exchange via discussion group about what we all think or feel is 'true love'... and how we feel it.. do we feel it only when we lose it? i'm sure it's different for everyone..
also.. if he or she doesn't love you.. why would you want them to come back? what if they come back out of convenience? scary thot this love stuff..
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Re: True Love?
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by lovesucks on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:17:40 PM AEST
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| Your so right interested in talking to you to my E-mail is tajohnson24@netscape.net let's chat |
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Re: True Love?
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 12:00:56 AM AEST
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| get write and keep it up |
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