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Our Secret Escape.
Contributed by
evah2121
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Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 11:30:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Let's escape to our perfect place.
where we will feel incredibly safe.
Our hearts will beat calmly against our chest,
And we will feel like everything Is perfect.
Let's escape to the world of wonder,
we will no longer be twirling In the black cloud of thunder.
All our negativity will drain;
The only thing left would be the love marked on your heart and your brain.
The only thing that can keep us apart,
Is the fact that there's always an end to a start.
But I promise that I'll always be by your side.
Now lets escape somewhere and close your eyes.
Lets escape to a secret place.
Let's make It our secret escape.
Close your eyes, and you can escape to where ever you'd like.
Don't be scared, I won't leave without a fight.
Open your eyes.
& I'll still be by your side.
Keep them open, cause you never know what will come your way.
But close them, when you just want to escape.
Copyright ©
evah2121
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2010-07-08 11:30:33]
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Re: Our Secret Escape.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 12:27:26 AM AEST
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I really like this. It was like an "escape" for me. I enjoy going into fantasy worlds sometimes. Quite often 'tis better than real life.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim
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Re: Our Secret Escape.
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by thebadguy9999 on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 08:40:03 AM AEST
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| very good write |
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