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Mr. Right?
Contributed by
Poetry4fun
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Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 10:04:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You make me smile when I see your face.
It makes me think back on that special phrase.
The one where I tell you that you make my day.
Then laugh inside cause' of the lies I say.
You say you miss me and I say it back...
You have no idea how much feeling I lack.
Roses are red, lily's are white.
After all you've said, still not Mr. Right.
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Re: Mr. Right?
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by bunit682 on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 05:04:54 PM AEST
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| Well I liked the begining of it untill you started lying... But hood write none the less please read some of mine and comment if you so choose |
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Re: Mr. Right?
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by spud on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 12:30:43 AM AEST
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Hi,
AND THE TRUTH WILL SET YOU FREE!
Honest and well written - but has HE read it?
Tommy
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