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Something that Time
Contributed by
harsh
on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 12:23:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Something That time
Something that time was left unsaid
That pinched me deep inside
Something was there lurking undead
That formed a ripple before the tide
Something that time was left untouched
That soon began to rot
Something was there that we wanted so much
That I could never thought
Something that time was left unfelt
That started to wither and perish
Something was there that hadn’t been dealt
That was meant to be loved and cherished
Something that time was left undone
That was waiting for us to try
Something was there that hadn’t begun
That was deciding to live or die
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As of this submission and documentation, you have 8 poems posted yet only 1 interactive comment. Unless you want this to be your last post, at the very least, bring your comment to poem ratio to 1:1. Thank you.
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harsh
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Re: Something that Time
(User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 06:53:43 AM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: Something that Time
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by DayLilly on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 12:25:45 PM AEST
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| great:) |
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Re: Something that Time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 04:38:51 AM AEST
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I've just been reading through your poems
And to be honest, I love them all.
You're expression and choice of words is excellent.
What I'd really love to see from you would be a free verse poem or two.
I think it'd just unlock even greater potential.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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