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Newfound Interest
Contributed by
daylilly
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Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 11:22:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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My body shutters, my mind goes blank
My heart pounds to it’s own beating voice
I feel goose bumps rising to the tank
My eyes close, soaking this in by choice
The music, my newfound interest
I can’t live without it, it is mine
Love for music can not be suppressed
The musical notes can be divine
I must say, I find this sickening
How a single tune gets my frail heart
Trying to hold onto a small string
How I love this invisible art
Oh how I am jealous of the sound
Beautiful, it is, can’t be impound
<3DayLilly
pretty sure i already posted this, but it doesn't show up on my page:/ sooo here:)
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Re: Newfound Interest
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 01:53:40 AM AEST
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great poem! especialy the 3rd stanza
good job |
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Re: Newfound Interest
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by pooja on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 10:29:43 AM AEST
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"Oh music,a magic beyond anything we ever know" !!
The poem echoes sentiments which give a sense of Deja Vu
nicely written. |
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