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Fate and Guilt
Contributed by
naturechic411
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Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 07:25:36 PM in AEST
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I sat there,
Waiting for something to happen;
Hoping for something to happen;
Anything.
I got that something;
Just not a good something.
Guilt and sadness eat away at my heart,
While the incurable eats away at my father.
I did this.
I asked for something to happen,
Something that would change my life,
Forever.
I never specified
Whether I wanted it to be a happy Something,
Or a sad Something.
And sometimes,
When you don't specify,
Fate plays a cruel trick.
The cruel part is watching my father crumble,
Watching my father slowly die.
While Guilt and Sadness kill me,
Cancer kills my father.
I'd like to see Fate survive that unchanged AND unharmed.
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Re: Fate and Guilt
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by evah2121 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 07:56:34 PM AEST
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I'll be the first to say,
That your poem was awesome :)
Keep up the good work.
-Evelin. |
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Re: Fate and Guilt
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by nobodyJQ on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 03:34:44 AM AEST
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good one.
keep them coming |
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Re: Fate and Guilt
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by thebadguy9999 on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 07:38:55 AM AEST
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| very sad poem.nice write |
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Re: Fate and Guilt
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by quadira on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 01:45:20 PM AEST
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| So sad. But a great poem |
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