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The Darkest Side Of Love
Contributed by
shereal_14
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Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 01:33:44 PM in AEST
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He always has to be so angry.
It makes me think that he's just crazy.
It scares me when he gets like that,
He likes to yell and call me fat.
I never thought things would get this bad.
They claim a head injury is why he's always mad.
The good times we share seem to go by in a blur,
And once again we start to bicker.
Late at night the neighbors hear us screaming.
Sooner or later it will be the law that does the deeming.
He chokes me until I am no longer breathing;
I always wake up seething.
Seething mad, just like him.
I'm just the same as he,
I wish everyone would just let us be.
We make up in the darkness of night,
Between the sheets and God it feels so right.
Amidst the shadows our bodies twine,
His essence tastes like sweet red wine.
But now I'm in a bind.
His life is gone, and so is mine.
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Re: The Darkest Side Of Love
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 01:41:29 PM AEST
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Great poem full of emotion. Love can have a dark side. This doesn't sound like a healthy relationship, but passion can blind a person. I hope things get better. Amazing poem!
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Re: The Darkest Side Of Love
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by Sushila on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 06:47:01 PM AEST
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Clouded feelings of frustrations entwined with love has been clearly expressed with well chosen rhyming words.
This gives the poem a depth of thought.
Well done. |
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Re: The Darkest Side Of Love
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by evah2121 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 08:13:00 PM AEST
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I could feel your passion by the way you write.
Good job, (: |
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Re: The Darkest Side Of Love
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 12:07:41 AM AEST
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i hear about this kind of thing all the time and it always confuses me, but your poem conveyed some sense to me. i just hope partners would make the best decisions possible. well written write btw...
take care
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Re: The Darkest Side Of Love
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by quadira on
Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 03:43:29 PM AEST
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gets across the complications and contrasts of a violent relationship that most people couldnt explain. very very clever
well done |
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Re: The Darkest Side Of Love
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by Paul427 on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 08:57:15 PM AEST
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| Great job! |
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Re: The Darkest Side Of Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 09:43:51 AM AEST
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Seems like this relationship has so many loose threads, but one overwhelming strong thread that keeps it together.
Trying to make sense of things sometimes just makes them seem even more complicated.
Steve |
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Re: The Darkest Side Of Love
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 08:29:22 AM AEST
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| The Darkest Side Of Love nice loved the word flow keep on doing what you are doing. |
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Re: The Darkest Side Of Love
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by huwbeauty on
Sunday, 19th December 2010 @ 03:05:07 PM AEST
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| A powerful and moving write,Encapsulating so many emotions. |
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Re: The Darkest Side Of Love
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by ICEKASH on
Thursday, 16th February 2012 @ 10:34:11 PM AEST
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| Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all |
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