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Behind The Mask
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
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Behind the mask is a man full of love, but forced to wallow in blood,
It's the scars on my face, that raises your heart rate,
It makes you turn away, and run for the light of day,
The darkness of my mind, allows my power to grow stronger with time,
I came to you in dreams, passionatly calling your name followed by screams,
I've been bond to this place, I wear the the mask in hope fear is replaced,
It's cold and dark, but the warmth you need is in my heart,
What you see is an illusion, allow our love to fusion,
Don't pull away, give me your hand, please stay,
Behind the mask is a man wounded by the past,
A heart calling out, don't let my horrid face install any doubt,
A man full of pain, hiding my face, I'm so ashamed,
Behind the mask is a man with faith, who will do anything to keep you safe,
A man who would die a thousand times, to keep you from doing it just one time,
This man is only 26, and knows your something he can't resist,
A man of truth, who's given his heart to you as proof,
I'm at your feet, please I beg you, accept me,
Look into your heart, are we really that different, do we have to be apart,
Accept me for who I am, seek and you will find the beauty within,
Behind the mask is where I hide,
I leave you with these words to captavate your mind.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:50:07 PM AEST
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Behind the mask is where I hide,
I leave you with these words to captavate your mind.
bravo!!!... vivid poem... i saw the phantom of the opera twice on stage and this poem would have been an excellent epilogue to it... blessings to you and your lovely wife and stay safe!! |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:06:06 PM AEST
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I love this poem. Great write!! Will be looking forward to you coming back.Have a good time while your away!!
Michelle |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 03:17:18 PM AEST
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| I really like this one, Phantom. I interpret this as the life of someone who is forced into darkness when he is isolated for who he is, and only wants love. Even a trained killer can value life and the love it can hold. It is sad when we are forced to where a mask, to keep our sanity( this I know alot of) and there is a loving, caring, generous person inside of what seems to be an empty shell. It is sad when people judge falsely for our jobs or our freedom of expression. I might be interpreting this poem wrong...I don't know if your going away is war related, or if you are just taking a road trip... but it seems to me this is a good bye,-don't hate me for doing what I have to do poem. Even though I am against war or blood shed of any kind, I respect what you do, and the sacrafice you lay down for freedom. Don't take this the wrong way... but I'd wait for you. You really touched me with this one. Be safe. |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:12:47 PM AEST
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Awww Matt...I will surely miss you, your poems and your pm's.... Do keep safe and have a good time.. Lovely write... No matter what the mask covers, it does not hide your beautiful heart........
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Jenni |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:28:12 PM AEST
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Touching words! Great write, I'm gonna miss your poems! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:53:12 PM AEST
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ohhh where are you off to? im going to miss your postings and friendship!! i was hoping maybe you could be assigned a laptop with your gear?:P !! please take care and know always in your deepest heart that so many here are with you in spirit, and hurry back!!!!!!! hugs n' love to you n' yours, always nessa
p.s. great write!!!!! |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by venkat on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:01:22 AM AEST
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| A great poem from a great divine soul.. I saw the inner beauty of your soul in each of your writing.. I know that you are dedicatedly bound to you duty. hats off my friend.. hope you will see us again. blessings always through my spiritual heart... venkat |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by Kane on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:23:49 AM AEST
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So this is the man behind the mask, well you sound so weak. LOL Anyway take care and hope to see you soon.
Kane |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:07:53 AM AEST
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The mask you wear only hides your outer shell!
Great peice! Your leaving again?
Where? I hope you are away from those bombs! Stay safe! Christina |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by lovesucks on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:50:28 AM AEST
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Beautiful work, I love it....Very descriptive and captavating... Hope to see you come back soon to read some more of what you write...Have a safe trip and keep up the great work.
Theresa |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by lovesucks on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:50:33 AM AEST
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Beautiful work, I love it....Very descriptive and captavating... Hope to see you come back soon to read some more of what you write...Have a safe trip and keep up the great work.
Theresa |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 01:32:06 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem and I already know the wonderful man behind that mask. Congrats again my love on your new promotion!!!! |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by wazarov on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 06:21:52 PM AEST
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| no one wrote like that and no one will again, for that you have a heart of man, you may hide your face behind the mask but you never hid your heart. a great and wonderful write that will survive the dust of time. |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by Funnygrl_03 on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:34:58 PM AEST
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| Hey i love this poem it is really good. U have a lot of talent |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 11:07:17 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your kind words, YPDC means so much to me, every last one of you I'd like to call family. Your comments warm my heart, make me want to write even more. I do hope I'm not forgotten while I'm away. Upon my return I pray I'll see you all agan. Thank you.
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 07:41:25 AM AEST
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| Oh this has to be the most heartfelt write I have read of yours ... truly moving ... how could anyone not be touched by these words ... your wife is the luckiest woman alive ... a beautiful poem indeed. ... Jan |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 08:00:52 PM AEST
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Thank you my dear Ladydama, for your kind words, fore I have seen The Phantom Of The Opera myself. I love it also. But my poetry and The Phantom Of The Opera metioned in the same phase, is one honor I thank you for. Thank you.
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 08:03:33 PM AEST
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Thank you Michelle,
Your too kind, I'm not sure if I deserve the prise I've recieved. But thank you. Much love.
The Phantom |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:11:20 PM AEST
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Thank you so much for the comment, I don't recieve many from you, but the ones I get I enjoy throughly. No I'didn't go off to war Thank God, I don't like war anymore then the next guy, I've seen my share. But thank you for your comment.
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:13:30 PM AEST
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Thank your Jenni, your a true friend and a shining light in this darkness I call life. Thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:14:52 PM AEST
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Thank you Moonlite, I havn't recieve many comments from you but I cherish every one Thnk you.
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:16:46 PM AEST
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Ladyfawn you know I could never forget YPDC, but even more I could never forget you. Much love.
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:18:56 PM AEST
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Thank you my dear friend Venkat, you are a gentleman among gentleman, your comment always touch me thank you.
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:21:42 PM AEST
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Yes Christina, I will be far away from those bombs, the mask is wear I hide but your comments are slowly bring me out of my shell. Thank you Christina, much love.
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:23:54 PM AEST
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Thank you Theresa for your comment, I don't get many from you, but each one is a gift. Thank you so much.
The Phantom |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:25:16 PM AEST
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Thank you Baby for your comment I love you too.
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:28:12 PM AEST
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Thank you so much for your comment, I don't know if I deserve the immortle words you have placed upon this poem, but thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Behind The Mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:32:07 PM AEST
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Thank you Jan, your words are a sweet kiss of summer rain thank you so much for your comment.
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