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Rockabye
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 01:04:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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One solitary stain,
Blood red on the white carpet
Leaves me feeling empty;
Hollow I fall asleep,
Clutching at my belly ----
Suffering the silence alone.
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JakerBaker88
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2010-07-06 13:04:27]
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Re: Rockabye
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 03:49:17 PM AEST
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Re: Rockabye
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by Sushila on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 06:52:45 PM AEST
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You have caputured the feeling of disappointment so well in this short poem.
May the Lord bestow his kindness to fulfil the wish of getting pregnant. |
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Re: Rockabye
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 01:51:08 AM AEST
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expressive and emotional, in such few lines
all the best
robin |
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