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Eunice Cuts
Contributed by
quadira
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Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 04:46:32 AM in AEST
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Eunice cuts
She holds the blade in her hands
The only friend that understands
That digs deep enough to feel her pain
That she can turn to over again
Her secret is safe with this new found friend
It won’t let her down right to the end
Always there when she is in need
To help her remember she has feelings indeed
She knows exactly what each cut was for
Each one is deeper than the one before
Each time her heart hurts and no ones around
She confides in her friend without making a sound
The end
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Re: Eunice Cuts
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by Antzus on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 07:20:29 AM AEST
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| The implied savagery here, I can't help but feel it's somehow juxtaposed with some sort of innocence. Very interesting little poem. |
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Re: Eunice Cuts
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by evah2121 on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 12:38:01 PM AEST
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I can tell you have very much potential (:
Awesome poem! |
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Re: Eunice Cuts
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by Spike on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:35:07 AM AEST
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A great poem for highlighting the relationship between the cutter and the weapon of choice - haven't read a self harm poem so intimate. great insight.
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Re: Eunice Cuts
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by Libertina on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 12:30:41 PM AEST
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| I wouldn't call something awesome that is only repeating typical teenage "sorrow". This is a serious subject, and I simply can't stand this my- blade- my- friend- NONSENSE! If, dear quadira, you and "she" are the same person, go and get help. That is no offense, but advice. And if not, stop to pretend you know anything. You don't. |
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