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My Neutral State

Contributed by BigDre on Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 07:57:06 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I am trying to reach that state where everything is ok.
The weights of life are properly balanced,
and my emotions are in a calm state.

Everything is in order, Everything is in place
Everything is aligned in Time, Matter and Space.

My Neutral state is right before a beginning and right before the end.
Its where infinity starts and where it ends.

Its right before being inept and being full of vigor.
I have heard other describe it as being right before passing out from drinking to much liquor

Some people abuse drugs just to reach this state,
but if you are hurting yourself in the long run, are you really achieving neutrality.

There is no obstruction in my blood flow, my bones are properly set,
my heart beats at a normal rhythm, aches and pains are non-existent.

Its like the neutrons and electrons in my body are in a harmonious state.
If I could stay here forever, It would truly be great.

If I could bottle it and sell it, Starbucks would have nothing on me,
It would be better than any energy drink, and would eliminate this juggernaut consumption of caffeine.

The white flag has been waived temporarily between me and my circumstances,
But I would be a fool to think that war has ended.
This neutral state post a sign on my door saying "All Activities in this life are temporarily suspended."

I usually have a taste of it, just before the sun chooses to rise,
I'm laying in bed awake, but I haven't open my eyes.
Suddenly, the first thought of the day hits my mind,
And that Neutral state flees without saying Good Bye.

Trying to pursue this state would be a frivolous pursuit,
But enjoying my neutral state when I have it is what I shall do.

Copyright © BigDre ... [ 2010-07-05 19:57:06]
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Re: My Neutral State (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 01:29:15 AM AEST
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Good write

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