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Pillow Indentation
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:45:48 PM in AEST
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Your impression stays,
solitary remenant,
lying by my side
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-07-03 19:45:48]
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Re: Pillow Indentation
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 10:15:16 PM AEST
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Once again summing a whole heck of a lot with so few words. I love the image and I could even imagine a smell (like perfume...or probably cologne in your case). To provoke thought; to provoke the imagination, that is poetry at work.
Thank you.
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Re: Pillow Indentation
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 4th July 2010 @ 01:09:57 PM AEST
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| very short but it gets the point across |
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Re: Pillow Indentation
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by windowguy on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 10:03:11 AM AEST
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| Powerful write in a few short words. Another top class haiku. |
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