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We Make, We Care
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 04:43:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The irony, the suns shines brightly
The whisper of the cool breeze
My clothes fitting tightly
A scented flower makes me sneeze
A swim in the lake
And a look in her eye
Naked alone nothing to take
Under the bright blue sky
When hands touch
The scent of her skin
I love her so much
With nothing to win
Alone again in the sands of time
With voices crying in the night
All I have is my rhyme
And now I must stave the fight
Someone new for me to love
To walk the earth and to know
To accept the gift from above
And take with me where I go.
23rd January 2009
9:39:31 am
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Re: We Make, We Care
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by lesoleilnoire on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:07:49 PM AEST
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Nicely written. Your message is true about love here. Great imagery.
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Re: We Make, We Care
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by emystar on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:30:10 PM AEST
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Another beautiful, touching, sweet wrte.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: We Make, We Care
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by emystar on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:30:11 PM AEST
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Another beautiful, touching, sweet wrte.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: We Make, We Care
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by omarzz on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 05:47:03 AM AEST
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| a pure write from the soul |
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