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I Can't Say
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I Can’t Say
I can’t say, I’ve never glanced at a pretty face,
or turned to look again in haste.
I can’t say, that my mind will never wonder,
in the roar of the lighting and thunder.
I can’t say, my words will always be clear,
when it comes to how I feel about you dear.
I can’t say, my ears will always hear,
every word you try to tell me, I fear.
I can’t say, there will never come a time,
when your not always first on my mind.
I can’t say, I’ll always be your knight in shining armor,
holding you thought a stormy night, till it becomes calmer.
I can say, my love will always be true,
as I struggle to be the best, I can be for you.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2003-04-16 09:35:00]
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Re: I Can't Say
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by Dot on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 09:39:28 AM AEST
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| That's all we can ever do-our best. Great poem, Jeff. Dot |
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Re: I Can't Say
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by lovesucks on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 10:20:17 AM AEST
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Great poem it was good and I enjoyed it I wish everyone thought that way. GREAT JOB!
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Re: I Can't Say
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:26:16 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh that is so beautiful! Honest and realistic but somehow perfect... great write! :D Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: I Can't Say
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:05:56 PM AEST
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So honest yet so sweet at the same time. I really enjoyed this write.
Michelle |
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by full_blur on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:06:34 PM AEST
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| good stuff. I really enjoy the repetition and then the closure at the end |
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:25:38 PM AEST
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| Amazing. Love the repitition of.. "I can't say" and then how you wrap it all up at the end. It really brings it all together. |
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