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crib
Contributed by
elle
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 12:43:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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the idea insulates itself
inside my head
burrows deeply
& buried there. . .
an itch that cannot be scratched
an event horizon beckoning
where machinations splinter
& diffuse, expanding there
into indefinable nothingness. . .
persuading me to just a glance
alluding to the boundless
of which we're all unknowingly a part
& in my gesturing wisdom
a historian of blind wings
I turn away from shadow-self
annoint my inner child
renege vague defenses
before celestial hosts
as gravity shifts
as darkness dawns
& the sands of time
reframe the desert of my soul
the head-board creaks
nervously
crude, indifferent sleep
rages against meek dreams
surely, I have never been
so incomplete
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-07-03 00:43:38]
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Re: crib
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by Spike on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 12:58:54 AM AEST
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elle,
wonderful, and a very familiar internal landscape, to this reader anyway. An absorbing post.
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Re: crib
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by bubly on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 01:54:02 AM AEST
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| Brilliant and beautiful.You are a blessed writer. |
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Re: crib
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 10:51:28 PM AEST
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The universe is vast and some stars shine brighter than others. You shine even brighter. Your poems are often compelling; always unique and thought provoking. |
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