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the absence of him
Contributed by
theunknown
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Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 09:40:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There is an absence in my heart
This absence is where he belonged
He told me that he loved me
And I was stupid enough to believe him
Even though I knew he was seeing her
When I confronted him about it he left me out in the cold
He left me with an absence in my heart that will never be filled
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Re: the absence of him
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by The_Unknown on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 12:36:17 AM AEST
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Sad poem... It really reminds me of something that just recently happened.
Oh yeah, and your name looks familiar ;)
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Re: the absence of him
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 08:10:37 AM AEST
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| good write. i know someone who will never leave you. |
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Re: the absence of him
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by bubly on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 09:57:11 AM AEST
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| sad...and nice. |
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Re: the absence of him
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by smeethers on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 02:13:44 AM AEST
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| That is sad, i know how you feel. good poem be strong :] |
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