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Last Lesson
Contributed by
spike
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Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 06:44:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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her mistake, she cut too deep
beyond where any tears would weep,
well below the everyday
that a razor blade could slice away
indeed, she went beyond the bone,
to niches she had never known
and shone a light into herself
where futures sat along their shelf
in demise, her epiphany
insight doesn’t come for free;
there’s always loss beyond the pain
and reasons, many to refrain
…too late.
Copyright ©
spike
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2010-07-02 18:44:19]
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Re: Last Lesson
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 08:11:43 PM AEST
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Intense poem, quite sad. This is very well-written and very true. Some people make incisions that can never be stitched. Great writing.
Heidi |
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Re: Last Lesson
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 11:00:56 PM AEST
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This is a very sad subject to say the least.
You really wrote a touching write.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Last Lesson
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by northernlights on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 11:08:01 PM AEST
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| A very sensitive write bringing to the fore the horror of self harm,pervading sense of sadness |
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Re: Last Lesson
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 08:09:14 AM AEST
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| nice write but kind of sad. good job |
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Re: Last Lesson
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by spud on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 12:20:51 PM AEST
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Hi Spike,
Sounds like someone who went further than had
been intended(?) And for some there's no going
back.
A plaintive sincere insight into self-destruction.
Tommy
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Re: Last Lesson
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by quadira on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 03:25:18 PM AEST
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| great insight, very sad and true for so many. |
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Re: Last Lesson
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by chlois on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 01:55:42 PM AEST
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| love it..you completey brought her out and showed how she was feeling..fricken awesum |
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