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thinking nothing about you
Contributed by
bubly
on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 01:25:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I am thinkinking nothing about you,
But time goes by with thinking,
So i must be thinking something about you.
Without thiking so many thoughts,
Without dreaming so many dreams,
Have gathered on my life.
Yet my life seems to be larger than the gathering.
I wish the same was not with you,
So that you would come to me to unburden you
And you could see how near i live to you
And that you never escape me
Because i will never stop living in you.
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Re: thinking nothing about you
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by longhaircg on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 05:42:49 AM AEST
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nice try on your writing, I do understand the thought process, its harder to fall out of love
then to love. I choose to keep my love tucked away because its to hard to work on not loving.
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Re: thinking nothing about you
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 08:29:10 PM AEST
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Good poem. You are right. People should spend more time caring about their loved ones than focusing on being angry; life is too short to stay angry. Nicely written!
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Re: thinking nothing about you
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by Breezy on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 06:59:15 PM AEST
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The last verse is so moving. Especially that last line.
I can so relate to this. And I am guilty of the pride that
disguises love and builds walls. I feel this very deeply.
Nice post! -- Achelois |
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