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misspelled
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
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i'm too afraid to speak of everything i love in you
your smile that takes my breath away
and all the pain i suffer when you let it fade away
even then i know i'll never stop loving you theres just too much of me in you
a twisted sense of humor that makes us outcasts
when we're the only two to laugh.
there might have been a time when i wasn't scared of the lump in my throat or butterflies in my stomach,
it could have been that you felt the way i did for you that you felt for me
but now its back to the way it was
theres not much difference i still love you and you love me too
now i feel lonely and only your eyes can cure me
i've seen a deeper side to you and you are still flawless on that level.
if only i could say one line of this to your face i would feel relieved
now theres a week between us leading to weeks until a final departure i wish i could have been more confident
enough to say a few words to you
to have you love me
but instead im writing this without any thought
i hope you never forget me
you changed my life.
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Re: misspelled
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by Daydreamer on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 08:44:31 AM AEST
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| I know how it feels to like someone alot and not have the guts to say it to their face...I hope you can get enough and tell her how you feel. There is no real reason to fear telling her how you feel I am sure she wont ridicule you for it...if she is as nice and wonderful as your poem makes her out to be. ~Day~ |
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Re: misspelled
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by thatabbygirl on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:23:23 PM AEST
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| You brought out the emotion in this piece perfectly, I could really feel your love for her. Beautifully done. |
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Re: misspelled
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:12:35 PM AEST
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Oh how wonderful. My highschool days are long past now but I too still have problems at times telling certain people of my feelings. Send her this poem it will melt her heart for sure!!
Michelle |
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Re: misspelled
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by tease_whizz on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:04:06 AM AEST
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| beautiful, heartfelt. i hope she gets to read this - maybe you could send it anonymously, i think she'd know who it was from. twin souls shouldn't be apart. Kate x |
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