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Guards Down
Contributed by
zeberdee
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Thursday, 1st July 2010 @ 07:25:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Leaning back in my office chair
The first relaxing moment in hours
the first chance to let down my hair
and lay back amid a bed of flowers
The road ahead is far and long
but as I lay I know I will be strong
to face my obstacles and my demon
And I know that when I reach the end
I will be rid of my past and be a freeman
that is the reward of all the time I spend
on work, on poems, on life
on anxiety, on rage, on strife
I wake by a breath of fresh that touches my skin
and I close I the office window before I leave for Berlin
Copyright ©
zeberdee
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2010-07-01 19:25:48]
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Re: Guards Down
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2010 @ 10:50:55 PM AEST
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Very good work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Guards Down
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 08:40:13 PM AEST
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Very well-written. It portrays what all of us need to do more often--relax and enjoy life. Very nice imagery here.
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Re: Guards Down
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 10:40:18 PM AEST
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Nicely done and filled with image magic!
The first line really grabbed me and gave me the feeling of relaxation and reflection.
Thank you for sharing your first positive piece.It's great!
Blessings
LW |
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Re: Guards Down
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by Breezy on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:21:09 PM AEST
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This had a bit of an ethereal feel to it. But there is
a strength found in this that has conviction and
determination. A foundation that wil not be denied,
where one can find inspiration within the lines. A
wonderfully positive write. Well done!!
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Re: Guards Down
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 01:35:38 AM AEST
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| good write! thanks :) |
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