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Nothing
Contributed by
wti56
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Thursday, 1st July 2010 @ 05:19:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As the leaves on the brownest day
Felt their way across my window--I sat--
My tomb, of the most dispiriting color,
Overwhelmed by gloom that envelops
The brightest of suns that ever grace the hours
Of our feeble world.
My spirit--gone long ago--absent from my incasement
As I await this last thought:
When the last cloud dissapears
In the holy darkness that shown from a distance
And draws ever closer, revealed in its painful emptiness
That of the loneliest seas of nothingness, I die.
To no longer be of existence, as of the times before
When the skies were dry and heaven's fires were blind,
Here again--is nothing.
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Re: Nothing
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by AngelFox on
Thursday, 1st July 2010 @ 06:13:26 PM AEST
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| This is a great first entry. Very deep and thought provoking. |
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Re: Nothing
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by longhaircg on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 05:49:37 AM AEST
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very nice I did enjoy this deep lonely thought,
hope to read more of your works
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Re: Nothing
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 10:53:26 PM AEST
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So many "deep" writes are filled with a certain jaggedness.
This piece is captivating and inspiring and also yes...most thought provoking.
You really made me feel like you were saying this to me.
Truly you are gifted.
I too will be reading more of you :)
Blessings
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Re: Nothing
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by Breezy on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:37:25 PM AEST
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Wonderfully poetic despair. I love the darkness in this
and it couldn't have come on a more topical night. Damn
fine imagery. It stirs so many different emotions.
Nothing -- the word itself is so cold and broken.
Very well done. Excellent write!
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