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Black Flag
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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I raise my black flag
Teeth clenched, eyes bloodshot
I shout my war cry,
But the flag hangs limp and dead
Not responding to my fervour
My flag is plain, no symbol
Black as an Arctic winter
Maybe the only symbol
Is the lack thereof
Because there's nothing
And that is me, or what I have become
Nothing... and maybe it was created
So I could see the beauty in something
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2003-04-16 07:05:00]
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Re: Black Flag
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 07:47:28 AM AEST
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Hmmm..not sure what to think... I know I like the imagery you've created...
Hope all is well. Joel.
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Re: Black Flag
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by AngryPrincess on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 09:37:54 AM AEST
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great job....you succeeded joel for this one is amazing...its leaves everything to the imagination...sometimes thats the best way :O) i enjoyed this one...
Lindsey |
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Re: Black Flag
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 10:10:42 AM AEST
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| good one:) i like the symbolism, the more one thinks about this, the more meaning it has, hugs nessa |
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Re: Black Flag
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:20:28 PM AEST
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i like this from you...but don't totally change your style, because i also like your descriptive style of other works from you...you are good at both...when you write like this, it leaves room for the mind to wander...in your other poems, honest and raw emotions are exposed and that is a brave talent...
hugs
a fellow troublemaker
:-)
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Re: Black Flag
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:41:17 PM AEST
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Im lost in the emotion. I hope you find the beauty your looking for.
Michelle |
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Re: Black Flag
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 09:26:26 AM AEST
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| i liked this one, it is different from you but i liked the way it hits home at the end |
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