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unconscious cycle
Contributed by
unkn0wnXpo3t
on
Wednesday, 30th June 2010 @ 01:32:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You ever felt a feeling that burned you inside?
Like you wish you could just run and hide
Counted the hours and days of absence
A love that just doesn't make sense
That could drive you insane
All the tears and the pain
You sit and wonder why is it that through it all you're still there
But if you weren't you'd be nobody in the middle of nowhere
It can be so self contradictory
Like Crying inside after a won victory
Knowing what the best thing to do is but your heart won't let you
To the point you don't think straight and confused about what to do
A half of you wants to believe there's a better tomorrow
When the other is afraid of endless nights in sorrow
Clinging desperately onto a feeling that with a passion made you want to live
Asking yourself whether you should walk away or forgive
Yet it's amazing once they're voice is on the other side of that line...
This ALL slowly starts to fade away as if it never existed within you and you see that face shine.....
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Re: unconscious cycle
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 30th June 2010 @ 11:08:51 AM AEST
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Interesting poem. I enjoyed. I like the contradictory elements involved. Nice flow also. Thanks for posting. I look forward to more of your poetry!
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Re: unconscious cycle
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by brialuv on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 06:40:14 PM AEST
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| i definently understand what poem is about its like you read my mind... great poem ! |
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