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What it's all about
Contributed by
bombBananaboom
on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 10:00:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Been holding back, and been held down.
Not anymore, It'll come around
Get it straight, my life, my mind
Cause you need yours and I need mine.
All the things gone unsaid
Roll around inside my head
Get it straight, Make it right
Focus now, it's all in sight
Look around and you shall see
The future is our destiny
Make it count, don't count it out
This is what it's all about
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Re: What it's all about
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 30th June 2010 @ 11:11:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem. It flows perfectly. Focus is very important as your poem states. Very concise. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Re: What it's all about
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 03:53:17 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: What it's all about
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by manbeast on
Monday, 12th July 2010 @ 03:46:10 PM AEST
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| thanks for joining, and for this poem |
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Re: What it's all about
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 12:11:20 AM AEST
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i found this very uplifting, its just what i needed.
thanx and well done :)
take care
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