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Slug
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 08:58:51 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Snail without armor,
slinking up the blade of grass,
proudly shows its skin
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lesoleilnoire
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2010-06-29 20:58:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Slug
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 30th June 2010 @ 02:27:10 AM AEST (User
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what a great description! I am really getting in to your poetry, very well done. |
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Re: Slug
(User Rating: 1 ) by cetblue on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:37:21 PM AEST (User
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I like how you describe a snail's shell as armor; your word choice in this poem is really good. |
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