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Turntable
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 06:26:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Tell you what--
Let's try something:
You can do all the dishes,
Pay all the bills,
Stock the fridge,
Take out the trash,
And clean the house,
And I'll complain
About the counter
And not so much as try to help.
You can cook for an hour,
Cut and wash for half,
Bring out cake or ice cream at my beck and call,
And I'll get angry
When you knock on my door,
Worried that your meal will go cold.
You can drive everywhere
To and from the airport,
Pick up my internet friends
And take me to events full of people
You'll never know,
And I'll try my best
To be nice about
Wanting alone time
The instant you have an idea.
You can swear off your dignity,
Pretend it's okay, that you love
Someone who doesn't even take the time
To appreciate you,
And I'll wish I was living with a girl,
Because I can't tell you to your face
That I don't love you back.
Copyright ©
EternitysLyre
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2010-06-29 18:26:51]
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Re: Turntable
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 10:48:16 PM AEST
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| Great poem,great way of expressing pent up anger and frustration well written |
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Re: Turntable
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by Rawjer on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 11:04:38 PM AEST
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thanks for capturing in a poem how i feel right now...even though i dont wish that feeling on anyone..its good to know im not the only one :)
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Re: Turntable
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by The_Unknown on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 12:49:20 AM AEST
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It flows nicely. It's kind of sad, though :(
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Re: Turntable
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 10:20:00 PM AEST
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I like the title.
This seems to be full of sadness and anger. But what struck me most was the sarcasm. Dripping.
Nice writing.
Tim
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