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Exhausted Fingers
Contributed by
JettaV
on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 09:39:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Scritch scratch
The words
They wont stop coming out.
They keep flowing-
They're not slowing down.
Skitch skatch
I don't know
If I love it
Or hate it
Skatch skitch
This feeling-
I just can't shake it.
My emotions are spewing out
In words I don't know.
The words- they don't stop,
They continue to grow.
The letters just
Keep coming my way
I can't stop writing,
I'm wasting away.
One,
Two,
Three poems
Four.
I am afraid
I'll keep writing more.
In these poems
My spirit lingers
I can't stop
These exhausted fingers.
Copyright ©
JettaV
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2010-06-29 09:39:13]
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Re: Exhausted Fingers
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 09:12:59 PM AEST
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Great poem showing how automatic and addictive writing truly is. Lately, I have had a lull in my writing, but I can relate to this piece. Nice job!
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Re: Exhausted Fingers
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by JJAA_91 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 07:02:53 AM AEST
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| very nice write actually, really enjoyed reading it. i like the play on the word scratch throughout the poem |
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Re: Exhausted Fingers
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 06:20:06 AM AEST
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| i like this poem! it's cute! it's so true, though. once you get involved into writing, and things come to you - you don't want to stop. you have talent. |
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