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summer
Contributed by
polaris773
on
Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 10:56:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It's really hot tonight,
the type of heat that
stops you from sleeping.
all you can do is just think.
Why do I have a window
I’m not really partial to the sun
and if there no breeze
the whole rectangle is useless.
What’s this fan doing for me.
There’s enough hot air in the room,
I really don’t need it blown on me
In rapid succession.
I guess I just like the white noise
And sweat it brings
I guess I’m fortunte to be alone
At least in the summer,
because it’s just too hot
to have something else breathing hot air on me.
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Re: summer
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 02:28:57 AM AEST
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| nicely writen, well done. |
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Re: summer
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by JettaV on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 10:01:57 AM AEST
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| It seemed a little pointless to read. |
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Re: summer
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 03:54:32 PM AEST
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| nice |
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