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The Sun and the Shadow
Contributed by
JettaV
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Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 05:40:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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One shines,
Like gold,
Heating my body,
As I sit in this empty
Grass field.
The other is dark,
Undoubtedly cold,
As it covers my whole
Like a shield.
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Re: The Sun and the Shadow
(User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on
Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 07:09:42 PM AEST
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| Very good, i like it:) It's simple, but has a drastic contrast. |
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Re: The Sun and the Shadow
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 02:34:35 AM AEST
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yes, the contrast between shadow and sun is brought to the surface by your well chosen
words, nicely done. |
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